The poem shows the detached perspective of those left behind: this creates a distance between the daughter and her father to depict the barriers in their relationship and the resulting isolation
The narration shifts briefly to at the end when the daughter describes the response to the father’s decision to come home: “no longer the father we loved”
Garland’s narrative shifts offer different versions of events: the father as he remembers his childhood and the daughter’s - both as a child and as an adult
The returns to to complete the poem: “And sometimes, she said, he must have wondered which had been the better way to die”
The ending conveys the isolation created within the family due to conflict and suggests the daughter’s loss as well as the father’s
The poem follows a rigid and ordered structure which represents both the rigidity of the family towards the father and the strict discipline of military duty.
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| The poem has a rigid structure of six lines per stanza | The structure reflects the idea of order and discipline, linking to the cultural and military values Garland explores in her poem |
However, at times, the poem shifts to free-flowing verse shown via enjambment, to represent the pilot’s thoughts and memories | Garland juxtaposes the controlled voice of the speaker with the reflective tone of the father reminiscing about his childhood | |
Garland shows the father as less controlled by ideas of patriotism, disobeying the strict rules of his culture | ||
The poem ends with the word ‘die’, emphasising the daughter’s powerful reflection: “He must have wondered which was the better way to die” | This highlights his isolation and suffering as a result of his decision to return home instead of sacrificing his life | |
The daughter, too, is left without resolution | ||
Garland alludes to the sacrifice and suffering of the entire family as result of conflict |
Garland weaves imagery alluding to the beauty and power of nature alongside images related to conflict, in particular, that of the Japanese kamikaze pilot. This conveys the emotions of the pilot as he battles with his decision to fight for his country or return to it.
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| The poem begins with a list referring to the undertaken by kamikaze pilots: “with a flask of water, a samurai sword in the cockpit, a shaven head” | Garland alludes to the powerful nationalistic messages the pilot received, and perhaps relies upon, to complete his mission, as he chants his “powerful incantantions”
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The speaker compares the boats in the ocean to bunting in a “blue-green translucent sea”, to describe the scene below as a positive one | The Garland uses connotes to the pilot’s love for his beautiful homeland and perhaps to the idea of victory and celebration | |
Garland contrasts the positive imagery with a description of a dark shoal of fish who seem to alert the pilot to something: the dark “swathes” of fish wave like a flag and flash at the pilot | Garland’s here contrasts the positive imagery of before | |
Here, her comparison of the fish to a flag suggests the pilot’s thoughts turn darker, and that nature is signalling to him | ||
Garland illustrates the power of nature and family to reverse the ideals the pilot has been taught | ||
| The speaker indirectly speaking on behalf of the pilot, lists the fish he used to catch with his family when he was young: “cloud-marked mackerel, black crabs, feathery prawns, the loose silver of whitebait” | The sensory nature of the father’s vivid memories evokes sympathy from the reader |
Garland shows that the thinks about her father despite their alienated relationship: this implies a sacrifice made on both their parts |
Try not to separate “language”, “form” and “structure” into three separate elements you need to include in your answer. To achieve top marks, you need to include an integrated comparison of the themes and ideas in this and the other poems in the anthology, and focus on the relevance of the method used by the poet to the ideas in the poem(s). This means it is better to structure your answer around an exploration of the ideas and themes in the poems, commenting on elements of language, form or structure that contribute to the presentation of these themes, rather than simply listing all of the key methods you think should be covered when writing about poetry (with no analysis or exploration of their relevance to the themes and ideas). Stay focused on the task, and then choose your comments based on the focus of the question.
Examiners repeatedly state that context should not be considered as additional factual information: in this case, it is not random biographical information about Beatrice Garland, or historical facts about kamikaze pilots that are unrelated to the ideas in Kamikaze. The best way to understand context is as the ideas and perspectives explored by Garland in Kamikaze which relate to power or conflict. This section has therefore been divided into two relevant themes that Garland explores:
Loss due to conflict
Powerlessness due to conflict
Remember, AO3 is only worth up to 6 marks in this question. You will be expected to demonstrate your understanding of the relationship between the poem and the context in which it was written in an integrated way, throughout your answer. It is therefore important to focus on the key themes, and have a thorough knowledge of the cluster of poems.
Context comes from the key word in the task, so your answer should emphasise the key themes of the effects of conflict and loss. Writing a whole paragraph about Japanese military culture is not an integrated approach, and will not achieve high marks.
The essay you are required to write in your exam is a comparison of the ideas and themes explored in two of your anthology poems. It is therefore essential that you revise the poems together, in pairs, to understand how each poet presents ideas about power, or conflict, in comparison to other poets in the anthology. Given that Kamikaze explores the ideas of loss due to conflict and powerlessness due to conflict, the following comparisons are the most appropriate:
Kamikaze and War Photographer
Kamikaze and Remains
For each pair of poems, you will find:
You will be expected not only to explore this poem in depth, but make perceptive comparisons to themes, language, form and structure used in other poems in the anthology that also comment on power and its nature. It is therefore important that you have a thorough knowledge of all of the poems, rather than just memorising a series of quotations. It is also essential that you not only write about the named poem but compare it to one other in the anthology. Only writing about the poem given on the paper will severely limit your marks.
Kamikaze and Poppies
Comparison in a nutshell:
Both Kamikaze and Poppies convey personal and individual loss due to conflict by presenting the perspectives of family members. The poems explore ideas related to bravery and honour, and how these values can lead to a sense of powerlessness for all involved in the conflict.
Similarities:
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Kamikaze shows the perspective of a family member after the war, in this case, a daughter, narrating a story about their father, a Kamikaze pilot | Similarly, in Poppies the poet shows the effect of loss on those left behind by presenting the perspective of a parent grieving their son’s death in war | |
In Garland’s poem, the perspective alternates between the father’s evocative memories as he leaves for war, and the daughter’s recounting of responses to his return | Weir uses (run on lines) to present a parent’s emotional and : a free-flowing memory about their son’s childhood | |
The shift from the personal and emotional pain of the father as he chooses to live rather than die contrasts with the pragmatic retelling of the division of the family on his return | Although, at points, Weir changes the tone with to break the flow, signifying the parent’s disrupted and emotional break in the voice | |
The speaker in Kamikaze uses to describe intimate moments the father remembers about his past as he flies to war | The speaker in Poppies also uses sensory imagery to describe intimate moments of the son’s childhood which the parent misses: “Graze my nose across the tip of your nose” | |
The pain of loss is presented in both poems by showing personal memories and perspectives of loved ones involved in a war |
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Powerlessness is shown via Kamikaze’s reflective tone which shifts perspectives from third-person (“he must have wondered which had been the better way to die”) to a first-person (“the father we loved”) The reflections shift perspective to convey the different ways the family members respond | Powerlessness of a family member is expressed in Poppies through the reflective tone of a dramatic monologue It is delivered by a parent in a direct address to their dead son: “hoping to hear your playground voice” | |
It could be argued that both speakers convey the individual’s sense of powerlessness after conflict as they reflect on their experience of loss | ||
Garland presents the daughter’s powerlessness through related to sound: “we too learned to be silent”, suggesting the daughter’s broken relationship with her father was not autonomous and without clear resolution | Weir represents the parent’s powerlessness to be with their son again using to end the poem without any : the parent is left listening for their son’s voice on the wind |
Differences:
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In Kamikaze, the father doubts his role in war | In Poppies, however, the parent suggests the son was innocent to the realities of war | |
The metaphor “the world overflowing like a treasure chest”, connotes to ideas of war bringing glory and adventure | ||
The father is convinced by his memories to return home instead of dying for his country | Here, the parent describes their son as “intoxicated” with war, implying he was poisoned with the ideas associated with it | |
The parent experiences loss because he is alienated by his family for refusing to sacrifice himself for his country | Here, however, the parent experiences grief as a result of the son’s enthusiasm for conflict |
It is a good idea to outline your choice of second poem in your introduction to your response, with a clear overview of the overarching themes within both poems. You can then use the theme to move between both poems to provide the substance to illustrate your arguments. However, this does not mean that you cannot focus on one poem first, and then the other, linking ideas back to the main poem. You should choose whichever structure suits you best, as long as comparison is embedded and ideas for both texts are well-developed.
This is an effective comparative choice to explore the impact of conflict on those other than soldiers themselves. Both Garland’s Kamikaze and Duffy’s War Photographer present unconventional perspectives and descriptions of the experience of conflict.
An unconventional experience of conflict is presented through a narration of a daughter telling her children a story about her father, a kamikaze pilot | Similarly, Duffy shows the experience of grief from the perspective of a war photographer developing photographs and remembering what he has seen | |
Garland’s poem is structured to represent the father’s personal reflections as he flies over his homeland on his way to a suicide mission | Duffy’s poem represents the photographer’s personal grief through disjointed flashbacks as he remembers those who have suffered in conflict: “running children in a nightmare heat” | |
However, Garland shifts perspective: the story is told from the daughter’s perspective as she reflects on her father’s choices and the impact of them | Duffy’s feels displaced back at home in “Rural England”. He describes their experience of pain as ordinary in comparison to what he has seen | |
The poems both present the effects of conflict on individuals involved with conflict around the world, as well its continuing impact afterwards | ||
The daughter’s feelings about her father’s decision are shown at the end of the poem as she acknowledges, “he must have wondered which was the better way to die” | The poem ends with the line “they do not care” suggesting a lack of for the speaker, and continuing suffering due to conflict | |
The poems consider the experience of grief as a solitary one; they convey the isolation of the parent and the photographer in their settings | ||
Both poets wish to raise awareness of the effect of conflict on individual lives beyond the battlefields, at home or at work |
Differences:
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Garland shows us a different perspective on by conveying the father’s love for country and heritage: seeing it below makes him turn away from his military duty | Duffy’s omniscient speaker allows the reader insight into the photographer’s thoughts about the futility of his work and frustration with his peers at home | |
He adopts a bitter tone towards his homeland, suggesting they are apathetic and disinterested in conflict: “The reader’s eyeballs prick with tears between the bath and pre-lunch beers.” | ||
Garland’s persona has strong positive emotions for his homeland and past. However, Duffy’s conveys feelings of resignation and detachment from his homeland | ||
The speaker describes how his family and neighbours strongly oppose his decision, and alienate him for disobeying his patriotic military duties | In contrast, Garland’s speaker takes on a cynical tone, suggesting the photographs of conflict do not evoke emotion at home: “his editor will pick out five or six for Sunday’s supplement” | |
She emphasises, with their extreme response: “as though he no longer existed” and “this was no longer the father we loved” | A comments on the lack of interest at home: “stares impassively at where/he earns his living and they do not care” | |
Though the reactions of those at home are different, each poem presents lasting isolation for individuals involved in the conflict |
Both Garland’s Kamikaze and Armitage’s Remains highlight the unrelenting nature of isolation and personal loss. The poems present speakers who feel powerless within conflict and in the wake of it.
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In Kamikaze, Garland uses the to describe how the family alienates him after he returns home: “They treated him as though he no longer existed” | On the other hand, in Remains, Armitage uses a voice to present the isolation of the soldier himself
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The speaker adopts a reflective tone to indicate her father’s thoughts as he flies over his homeland | The speaker’s tone is disjointed with caesurae and varied sentence lengths to reflect his brutal and haunting memories: “pain itself, the image of agony”
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The weaves emotion into an otherwise detached , suggesting feelings between the daughter and her father | ||
Garland’s speaker, the pilot’s daughter, uses at the end to allude to the personal loss the children felt losing their father: “ too learned to be silent, to live as though he had never returned” | While the start of the poem uses (“all three of us open fire”), this changes to his individual perspective when he returns home (“I see every round as it rips through his life –”): this suggests the isolation he feels after conflict | |
The speaker in Remains is left in the “here and now” without (“end of the story. Except not really”), while the speaker in Kamikaze is left wondering if her father has any regrets | ||
The poem’s speakers are both caught between the present and past, suggesting the relentless nature of their isolation and the far-reaching impact of conflict |
In Kamikaze, the pilot chooses not to engage in conflict, reminded of his love for family and homeland as he flies to a suicide mission | However, in Remains, the speaker has a to a moment during battle which haunts him, suggesting he regrets his actions in conflict | |
His decision leads to dishonour and isolation from his family and neighbours for what they believe are cowardly actions | His doubts are presented in the of the line, “probably armed, possibly not”, implying he has considered he may have killed an innocent man | |
Kamikaze presents the perspective of an alienated kamikaze pilot choosing family and home over his military duty, whereas Remains shows a soldier’s trauma after war for engaging in his military duty | ||
Garland’s speaker considers his decision at the end of the poem: suggesting her father may have regretted his decision: “He must have wondered which had been the better way to die” | Armitage’s is haunted by this moment: “I see every round as it rips through his life” He expresses the powerlessness he feels: “the drink and drugs won’t flush him out” | |
Both poems comment on the powerlessness experienced by those involved |
You can choose whichever poem you feel you are able to make the most in-depth comparisons to in the exam. For example, you could choose to compare the presentation of family loss in Kamikaze and Poppies. Or you might wish to explore the idea of powerlessness in Kamikaze and Remains. What is important is that you view the poems thematically, with a clear emphasis on power and conflict. This will give you a better framework in which to write your response in the exam.
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When it comes to poetry, many students find essay structure the hardest part to master. There is really nothing complicated to this though, and if you follow the trusty PEEZAP structure (useful for all essay subjects, not just English), then your analysis will be off to a flying start. I have provided a model example of this structure below – comparing Ozymandias by Percy Bysshe Shelley and Kamikaze by Beatrice Garland below. But first, what exactly is PEEZAP?
If you are unfamiliar with these poems, watch the YouTube videos first. Then take a look at the essay below. Be a critical teacher! Do you agree with the PEEZAP markings, and what would you improve – and why?
An Ozymandias reading by Bryan Cranston and BBC Teach analysis by Akala:
There is also a very useful colour-coded reading of Kamikaze , in addition to a Guardian documentary on real-life Kamikaze pilots:
Feeling ready? Let’s go on the structure masterclass…
Introduction – Introduce your main point (in relation to the question), before focusing on what the poems have in common, as well as differences. Even if they deal with similar themes, no two poems will be exactly the same – so show you’re aware of the nuances.
In Ozymandias by Percy Bysshe Shelley and Kamikaze by Beatrice Garland, both poets present ideas about the inevitability and inescapability of fate. In Ozymandias , Shelley presents the decaying statue of an ancient King as an allegory for the eventual end of power that we are all fated to suffer – most especially the proud. Kamikaze also deals with the futility of trying to avoid one’s fate (and death), but from a much more personal, human perspective. Whilst these two poems differ greatly in their structure, settings and imagery, both ultimately provide the same (somewhat sombre) memorial to human beings inevitably and powerlessly subject to the vicissitudes of fate and their own mortality.
PEEZAP Paragraph 1
Point | – | In , the central motif of a collapsing statue is used to depict a futile and ill-fated struggle to maintain power and survival. |
Evidence | – | The poem describes “two vast and trunkless legs of stone” which serve as a metaphor for the pharaoh’s own ego and power. Just like the statue itself, they are being eroded by time and nature. |
Explanation | – | Written by Shelley in 1819, the poem was inspired by the recent unearthing of a large statue of the Egyptian Pharaoh, Ramesses II. The Egyptian Pharaoh’s believed themselves to be gods in mortal form – “king of kings” with legacies that lasted for ever. |
Zoom | – | Here, Shelley is presenting an ironic take on this belief, pointing out that all that remains is an arrogant boast on a ruined statue. |
Analyse | – | This “colossal wreck”, representing both the Pharaoh’s ego and the statue itself, is now left alone in the sands of the desert. |
Perspective | – | The final alliterative phrases “boundless and bare”, “lone and level” and “sands stretch” all further serve to reinforce this message. The desert sands (also representative of time) have inevitably outlasted the Pharaoh’s ego and power, and he is left to his faded, unimportant fate. |
PEEZAP Paragraph 2
Point | – | In a similar way to , Beatrice Garland also explores the futility of trying to avoid your own fate and destiny. This is done from a much more specific, human perspective however – depicting the conflict between the collective morals of Japanese culture, and the individual will to survive. |
Evidence | – | This conflict is particularly profound, as there appears to be no right answer to how the pilot should end his “journey into history”. Japanese Kamikaze pilots were expected to give up their lives on suicide missions for their country, but when the man returned his family “treated him as though he no longer existed”. |
Explanation | – | The use of impersonal pronouns (he, his and him) leaves the pilot nameless, as though the family are ashamed to name him. |
Zoom | – | This sense of shame and regret is further emphasized by the past tense of the final lines. |
Analyse | – | The narrator recounts that this was “no longer the father we loved.” The finality of this sentence’s punctuation creates empathy in the reader, heightening the pathos of the ending couplet which wonders “which had been the better way to die.” |
Perspective | – | Unlike , there is no hubris in the presentation of the pilot – but both are equally bound to their own mortality – whether literal or metaphorical. Whatever the right option was for Garland’s pilot, just like the “dark shoals of fishes” trapped in their “figure of eight” (a repetitive symbol of infinity) the pilot is also caught in the net of his own destiny. |
Structure – More difficult to follow the PEEZAP structure exactly – but so important to think about how each poem’s rhyme scheme and structure reinforces its central message.
Whilst Garland’s poem is presented in seven regular sestets (with a shift to italics to indicate a change of speaker), there is no overt rhyme scheme. This can be compared with Ozymandias , which also has a regular structure (written in a sonnet form, in iambic pentameter) and an irregular rhyme scheme. For Shelley, the irregular rhyme scheme could be symbolic of the broken statue itself – no longer perfect, and falling apart as the poem progresses. The sonnet form (usually composed as romantic love poems) could serve as a further ironic joke about the ruler’s ill-fated ego – or perhaps offer a more nostalgic, romantic tone of a lost legend. In a similar way, Garland’s poem offers no easy answers to the question posed by the pilot’s fate. Just like the non-existent rhyme scheme, no neat or easily comprehensible solutions are presented– challenging the reader to make their own judgments on events.
Conclusion – This should reflect the points made in the introduction – pointing out the similarities and differences.
In conclusion, both Ozymandias and Kamikaze depict central protagonists attempting (and failing) to escape their own fate. Whilst Ozymandias presents a more ironic description of a ruler sure of his own power and infallibility, Kamikaze presents a more nuanced, personalised description of an individual pilot trying to return home. Both poems explore the attempt to escape our human mortality in one way or another however, and both show characters ultimately drawn back to their very human, very lonely destinies – both fated to be forgotten and ignored in one way or another.
For more essay skills practice, take a look at my previous post on GCSE English terminology . With a combination of good structure, killer analysis and sophisticated terminology – you can’t go wrong. Do get in touch with any questions, and happy essay writing!
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I just came across the Ozymandias poem and it made me stop and reasses my priorities in life. It’s a powerful piece and this review does both those poems justice. 👏
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Hi Kendi – thank you so much, that’s amazing it’s changed your own thought processes – how powerful. It’s a great and really thought provoking poem isn’t it? Really glad you enjoyed the analysis as well, and thanks for sharing.
Hi there! You helped me massively with my English poetry essay on the power of humans by the unique ideas discussed on this blog post so really, thank you so much! The ideas were unique and perceptive and many of my English teachers believe that Kamikaze and Ozymandias cannot be compared but this has been really insightful. Thank youu ❤
Hi – thank you very much for your message, and I am so glad that you found some of the ideas in the essay useful! All the very best for your studies, and good luck for any upcoming exams! 🙂 Amelia
Both ‘Poppies’ and ‘Kamikaze’ explore loss. In Poppies, Weir explores the loss that mothers feel when their children go off to war. She deliberately doesn’t mention one particular war, so that the experiences in the poem can apply to any war at any time. Weir makes the mother’s feelings of loss clear by writing ‘released a songbird from its cage’. Weir’s use of imagery helps the reader to imagine that the mother is having to open up a cage and release a vulnerable bird into the world. In this image, the bird symbolises her son and the cage symbolises the home they share together. It is clear that the mother is finding it very difficult letting her son go off to war, knowing that she may not see him again. In Kamikaze, the feelings of loss are different. When the father returns, he loses his family and they lose him, due to feeling that they must ignore him. This is linked to the honour of being sent on a Kamikaze mission and the shame that would have been felt if the pilot did not fulfil his duty to his country. Garland makes the children’s loss clear by writing ‘we too learned to be silent’. These words indicate that the children learn from their mother and neighbours that they must ignore their father, which means they lose their father and he loses them. Garland’s use of the word ‘learn’ is important as it indicates that they have been taught to ignore their father over a period of time. Garland’s use of the word ‘silent’ feels very cold because it encourages the reader to imagine that the father is completely ignored. It is clear in both poems that family members have suffered loss as a result of war.
Both poems explore sadness. Near the end of ‘Poppies’, Weir makes clear the mother misses her son by writing ‘hoping to hear your playground voice’. These words indicate that the mother has fond memories of her son as a child. Weir’s use of sound imagery in these words helps the reader to imagine the happy sounds of her son playing in the school playground. The imagery tells the reader how vivid the mother’s memories are of her son as a young child, and how difficult it must be for the mother knowing that she will never see her son again. Weir’s use of the word ‘hoping’ indicates that the mother is finding it difficult to let go of her son, and is hoping that one day she may hear his voice again. Similarly, Kamikaze ends with feelings of sadness. In the final line of the poem, Garland presents the speaker of the poem as regretful by writing ‘he must have wondered which had been the better way to die’. In other words Garland is suggesting that the father may have asked himself it would have been better to go through with the suicide mission because he was treated as if he was dead when he returned anyway. It is clear that the children will always look back on the way they treated their father feeling regret and sadness because they treated him as if he were dead.
Both poems explore struggle. In ‘Poppies’ Weir makes clear the mother struggles to say goodbye to her son on the day he leaves by writing ‘I was brave’. These words indicate that the mother is forced to appear brave when saying goodbye to her son, due to not wanting him to feel any guilt about leaving. Weir’s use of these words helps the reader to imagine all families who have been in this situation, having to wave goodbye to a family member going to war. We imagine how they would struggle knowing that this family member will be in great danger, and may never return alive. It is clear that war forces all people to be brave - not just the soldiers fighting. The struggle in Kamikaze is different. In Kamikaze, Garland explores the pilot’s struggle when he has to choose between his country and his family. Garland implies that, while the pilot is flying towards the enemy ship, he looks down at the water and sees fishing boats that remind him of his ‘father’s boat’. This brings back memories of days he spent fishing with his father and brothers. Garland implies that these memories encourage the pilot to turn his plane around because he realises that he does not want to lose his family. Garland is clear that she is not writing about a real Kamikaze pilot’s experience, but that she wanted to use her poem to imagine the struggle that young Kamikaze pilots would have gone through in this situation. It is clear in both poems that both the people fighting, and the families, struggle in war.
I can explore how Garland uses language and structure to explore the conflict between personal and national duty.
Key learning points.
Students may not recognise the use of different perspectives in the poem to represent distance.
Explain to pupils that the dual narrative is a stylistic choice of Garland to show the mother telling the story to her own children as if she is not a part of it. She then slowly reveals the pilot is her own father.
Incantations - a magic spell or charm
Patriotism - love or devotion to one’s country
Alluring - powerfully or mysteriously attractive or fascinating
Adult supervision suggested.
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"Kamikaze" was written by contemporary British poet Beatrice Garland and published in The Invention of Fireworks (2013). The title refers to Japanese pilots during World War II tasked with flying a suicide mission. With planes full of explosives and just enough fuel to make it to their target, kamikaze pilots had to fly directly at American warships to inflict maximum damage—killing themselves in the process. The poem tells the story of one particular pilot who decides to turn back, prompted by a childhood memory of his brother and father by the sea. Upon his return, however, his whole family disown him—including the poem's main speaker, his daughter.
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“kamikaze” summary, “kamikaze” themes.
Line-by-line explanation & analysis of “kamikaze”.
Her father embarked ... ... journey into history
but half way ... ... green-blue translucent sea
and beneath them, ... ... towards the sun
and remembered how ... ... father’s boat safe
– yes, grandfather’s ... ... prince, muscular, dangerous.
And though he ... ... chattered and laughed
till gradually we ... ... way to die.
Alliteration.
Select any word below to get its definition in the context of the poem. The words are listed in the order in which they appear in the poem.
Rhyme scheme, “kamikaze” speaker, “kamikaze” setting, literary and historical context of “kamikaze”, more “kamikaze” resources, external resources.
World War II Poetry — A valuable critical overview of WWII poets by the Poetry Foundation.
Garland's Perspective — Garland discusses the poem in this short interview.
Interview with Kamikaze Pilots — Garland's poem was in part inspired by this article, an interview with two kamikaze pilots.
More Poems by Garland — A link to Garland's own website, which has a number of her poems up for reading.
Shame and Honor — A fascinating essay that looks into the Japanese attitude towards shame and honor. The essay also focuses on bushido (which originated with the samurai warriors).
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Summary and key ideas in kamikaze.
In Beatrice Garland's Kamikaze, the speaker describes her father, a Kamikaze pilot, heading out one day on a suicide mission but then turning back.
Garland uses the structure and form of Kamikaze to mirror the mixed emotions of the speaker and the plot. These are the different structural techniques Garland uses to do so:
1 Ozymandias - Percy Bysshe Shelley (1792-1822)
1.1 Ozymandias Analysis
1.1.1 Summary
1.1.2 Key Ideas
1.1.3 Themes
1.1.4 Irony & Rhythm
1.1.5 Key Quotes & Comparisons
1.1.6 End of Topic Test - Ozymandias
2 London - William Blake (1757-1827)
2.1 London Analysis
2.1.1 Summary
2.1.2 Themes & Structure
2.1.3 Themes & Structure 2
2.1.4 Key Quotes & Comparisons
2.1.5 Exam-Style Questions - London
3 Storm on the Island - Seamus Heaney (1939-2013)
3.1 Storm on the Island Analysis
3.1.1 Summary & Structure
3.1.2 Themes
3.1.3 Themes 2
3.1.4 Key Quotes & Comparisons
3.1.5 End of Topic Test - Blake & Heaney
4 Exposure - Wilfred Owen (1893-1918)
4.1 Exposure Analysis
4.1.1 Summary
4.1.2 Personification
4.1.3 Themes
4.1.4 Structure, Key Quotes & Comparisons
4.1.5 End of Topic Test - Exposure
5 War Photographer - Carol Ann Duffy (born 1955)
5.1 War Photographer Analysis
5.1.1 Summary
5.1.2 Themes
5.1.3 Imagery
5.1.4 Comparisons & Key Quotes
6 My Last Duchess - Robert Browning (1812-1889)
6.1 My Last Duchess Analysis
6.1.1 Summary
6.1.2 Characterisation & Themes
6.1.3 Structure, Key Quotes & Comparisons
6.1.4 End of Topic Test - Duffy & Browning
7 The Prelude - William Wordsworth (1770-1850)
7.1 Extract from The Prelude Analysis
7.1.1 Summary
7.1.2 Personification & Imagery
7.1.3 Themes
7.1.4 Key Quotes & Comparisons
7.1.5 End of Topic Test - The Prelude
8 Charge of the Light Brigade - Alfred Tennyson
8.1 Charge of the Light Brigade Analysis
8.1.1 Summary
8.1.2 Themes
8.1.3 Rhetorical Techniques, Key Quotes & Comparisons
8.1.4 End of Topic Test - Charge of the Light Brigade
8.1.5 Exam-Style Questions - Charge of the Light Brigade
9 Bayonet Charge - Ted Hughes (1930-1998)
9.1 Bayonet Charge Analysis
9.1.1 Summary
9.1.2 Themes
9.1.3 Themes 2
9.1.4 Structure & Key Comparisons
9.1.5 End of Topic Test - Bayonet Charge
10 Poppies - Jane Weir (Born 1963)
10.1 Poppies Analysis
10.1.1 Summary
10.1.2 Theme of Motherhood
10.1.3 Imagery
10.1.4 Form, Structure & Key Comparisons
10.1.5 End of Topic Test - Poppies
11 Tissue - Imtiaz Dharker (Born 1954)
11.1 Tissue Analysis
11.1.1 Summary
11.1.2 Themes & Symbolism
11.1.3 Religion & Conflict
11.1.4 Form, Structure & Key Comparisons
11.1.5 End of Topic Test - Tissue
12 The Emigree - Carol Rumens (Born 1944)
12.1 The Emigree Analysis
12.1.1 Summary & Structure
12.1.2 Themes
12.1.3 Key Quotes & Comparisons
12.1.4 End of Topic Test - The Emigree
13 Kamikaze - Beatrice Garland (Born 1938)
13.1 Kamikaze Analysis
13.1.1 Summary & Structure
13.1.2 Themes
13.1.3 Themes 2
13.1.4 Structure, Quotes & Comparisons
13.1.5 End of Topic Test - Kamikaze
14 Checking Out Me History - John Agard (Born 1949)
14.1 Checking Out Me History Analysis
14.1.1 Summary
14.1.2 Themes
14.1.3 Key Quotes & Comparisons
14.1.4 End of Topic Test - Checking Out Me History
15 Remains - Simon Armitage (Born 1963)
15.1 Remains Analysis
15.1.1 Summary
15.1.2 Themes: Desensitisation &Trauma
15.1.3 Themes: Guilt
15.1.4 Themes: Nature of War
15.1.5 Structure
15.1.6 Key Quotes & Comparisons
15.1.7 End of Topic Test - Remains
16 Grade 9 - Themes & Comparisons
16.1 Grade 9 - Themes & Comparisons
16.1.1 Grade 9 - Themes & Comparisons
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Both poems clearly highlight guilt from war and the devastating consequences that come from it. Kamikaze acts a mouthpiece in order to ventriloquise and expose the reality for the Japanese soldiers; the consequences behind not obliging to the Japanese culture and societal expectations. Remains warns society about the impact of war on the psyche and the lasting effects it has on soldiers, who honourably serve our country. |
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During the era of the weak emperor Taisho (1912-26), the political power shifted from the oligarchic clique (genro) to the parliament and the democratic parties. In the First World War, Japan joined the Allied powers, but played only a minor role in fighting German colonial forces in East Asia. At the following Paris Peace Conference of 1919, Japan's proposal of amending a "racial equality clause" to the covenant of the League of Nations was rejected by the United States, Britain and Australia.
Arrogance and racial discrimination towards the Japanese had plagued Japanese-Western relations since the forced opening of the country in the 1800s, and were again a major factor for the deterioration of relations in the decades preceeding World War 2. In 1924, for example, the US Congress passed the Exclusion Act that prohibited further immigration from Japan. After WW1, Japan's economical situation worsened. The Great Kanto Earthquake of 1923 and the world wide depression of 1929 intensified the crisis.
During the 1930s, the military established almost complete control over the government. Many political enemies were assassinated, and communists persecuted. Indoctrination and censorship in education and media were further intensified. Navy and army officers soon occupied most of the important offices, including the one of the prime minister.
Already earlier, Japan followed the example of Western nations and forced China into unequal economical and political treaties. Furthermore, Japan's influence over Manchuria had been steadily growing since the end of the Russo-Japanese war of 1904-05. When the Chinese Nationalists began to seriously challenge Japan's position in Manchuria in 1931, the Kwantung Army (Japanese armed forces in Manchuria) occupied Manchuria. In the following year, "Manchukuo" was declared an independent state, controlled by the Kwantung Army through a puppet government. In the same year, the Japanese air force bombarded Shanghai in order to protect Japanese residents from anti Japanese movements.
In 1933, Japan withdrew from the League of Nations since she was heavily criticized for her actions in China. In July 1937, the second Sino-Japanese War broke out. A small incident was soon made into a full scale war by the Kwantung army which acted rather independently from a more moderate government. The Japanese forces succeeded in occupying almost the whole coast of China and committed severe war atrocities on the Chinese population, especially during the fall of the capital Nanking. However, the Chinese government never surrendered completely, and the war continued on a lower scale until 1945.
In 1940, Japan occupied French Indochina (Vietnam) upon agreement with the French Vichy government, and joined the Axis powers Germany and Italy. These actions intensified Japan's conflict with the United States and Great Britain which reacted with an oil boycott. The resulting oil shortage and failures to solve the conflict diplomatically made Japan decide to capture the oil rich Dutch East Indies (Indonesia) and to start a war with the US and Great Britain. In December 1941, Japan attacked the Allied powers at Pearl Harbour and several other points throughout the Pacific. Japan was able to expand her control over a large territory that expanded to the border of India in the West and New Guinea in the South within the following six months.
The turning point in the Pacific War was the battle of Midway in June 1942. From then on, the Allied forces slowly won back the territories occupied by Japan. In 1944, intensive air raids started over Japan. In spring 1945, US forces invaded Okinawa in one of the war's bloodiest battles. On July 27, 1945, the Allied powers requested Japan in the Potsdam Declaration to surrender unconditionally, or destruction would continue.
However, the military did not consider surrendering under such terms, partially even after US military forces dropped two atomic bombs on Hiroshima and Nagasaki on August 6 and 9, and the Soviet Union entered the war against Japan on August 8. On August 14, however, Emperor Showa finally decided to surrender unconditionally. After World War II had ended, Japan was devastated. All the large cities (with the exception of Kyoto), the industries and the transportation networks were severely damaged.
A severe shortage of food continued for several years. The occupation of Japan by the Allied Powers started in August 1945 and ended in April 1952. General MacArthur was its first Supreme Commander. The whole operation was mainly carried out by the United States. Japan basically lost all the territory acquired after 1894.
In addition, the Kurile islands were occupied by the Soviet Union, and the Ryukyu Islands, including Okinawa, were controlled by the USA. Okinawa was returned to Japan in 1972, however a territorial dispute with Russia concerning the Kurile Islands has not been resolved yet. The remains of Japan's war machine were destroyed, and war crime trials were held. Over 500 military officers committed suicide right after Japan surrendered, and many hundreds more were executed for committing war crimes. Emperor Showa was not declared a war criminal.
A new constitution went into effect in 1947: The emperor lost all political and military power, and was solely made the symbol of the state. Universal suffrage was introduced and human rights were guaranteed. Japan was also forbidden to ever lead a war again or to maintain an army. Furthermore, Shinto and the state were clearly separated. MacArthur also intended to break up power concentrations by dissolving the zaibatsu and other large companies, and by decentralizing the education system and the police. In a land reform, concentrations in land ownership were removed.
Especially during the first half of the occupation, Japan's media was subject to a rigid censorship of any anti-American statements and controversial topics such as the race issue. The co-operation between the Japanese and the Allied powers worked relatively smooth. Critics started to grow when the United States acted increasingly according to her self interests in the Cold War, reintroduced the persecution of communists, stationed more troops in Japan, and wanted Japan to establish an own self defence force despite the anti-war article in the constitution. Many aspects of the occupation's so called "reverse course" were welcomed by conservative Japanese politicians. With the peace treaty that went into effect in 1952, the occupation ended. Japan's Self Defence Force was established in 1954, accompanied by large public demonstrations.
Great public unrest was also caused by the renewal of the US-Japan Security Treaty of 1960. After the Korean War, and accelerated by it, the recovery of Japan's economy flourished. The economic growth resulted in a quick rise of the living standards, changes in society and the stabilization of the ruling position of the Liberal Democratic Party (LDP), but also in severe pollution. Japan's relations to the Soviet Union were normalized in 1956, the ones to China in 1972.
The 1973 oil crisis shocked the Japanese economy which was heavily depended on oil. The reaction was a shift to high technology industries. In the 13th century, as legend goes, a Mongol emperor massed a large fleet for the invasion of Japan. The Japanese nation had little to defend itself with, and a Mongol conquest seemed certain. As the fleet massed outside Tokyo Bay gathered to attack, a typhoon came up and either sank all the ships or blew them back to China. This storm, which the Japanese believed was sent by the gods to save their nation, was called "Divine Wind.
" In Japanese, the name is "Kamikaze." By 1945 it was apparent that Japan was losing the War in the Pacific. As a last ditch effort to turn around their flagging fortunes, the Japanese revived the name Kamikaze and applied it to the suicide missions of their air force. Japanese Vice Admiral Takashiro Ohnishi had noted that the most effective way to inflict damage to warships of the allies was to crash planes into them.
He pointed out that one accidental crash could do more damage than ten planes firing machine guns. It was decided that pilots would henceforth purposely crash their planes, which were to be loaded with half a ton of explosives, into enemy warships. The idea of suicide as a part of national military policy was completely new in the history of warfare. The surprise attacks were to take the Americans completely by surprise. They were bewildered by the Japanese suicide missions, completely unable to comprehend the mentality behind them.
The fact they were to go on suicide missions was accepted without question by the Japanese pilots. All newly conscripted into the Japanese Armed Forces were indoctrinated with the following five point oath: (1) A soldier must make loyalty his obligation (2) A soldier must make propriety his way of life (3) A soldier must highly esteem military valor (4) A soldier must have a high regard for righteousness (5) A soldier must live a simple life Especially emphasized among the Japanese Soldier code was unyielding allegiance to Emperor and country. The belief in the Kamikaze was stronger than ever. It was adamantly believed that, because they were fighting for their Emperor God, the Kamikaze would bring them deliverance at the darkest hour, just as it had in the 13th Century. In fact, the call for kamikaze pilots drew a staggering response.
Three times as many applied for suicide flights as the number of planes available. Experienced pilots were turned down. They were needed to train the younger men in how to fly to their deaths. As a result, the majority of those accepted were in their late teens.
They felt grateful to have the opportunity to prove that they were real men. The Kamikaze missions were a success in that they ended up sinking 40 American ships in the Pacific. In the Philippines another 16 enemy ships were destroyed. The cost to the Japanese was hundreds of lives, eagerly given up. But it was not enough. Unlike the divine wind that decimated the Mongols in the 13th Century, the kamikaze were unable to halt the march of the allies.
The surrender of their Emperor, broadcast to the nation via the radio was deeply shocking to the Japanese people. They had seen the Emperor as an infallible God and to hear him utter the word surrender was beyond comprehension. Their confidence was completely shattered. The divine wind never blew. With the passing of time, however, some of those who survived the Kamikaze raids have become criticial of the policy.
Saburo Sakai, a former Imperial Navy Ace, says: " Kamikaze is a surprise attack, according to our ancient war tactics. Surprise attacks will be successful the first time, maybe two or three times. But what fool would continue the same attacks for ten months? Emperor Hirohito must have realised it. He should have said Stop.
'" Another fighter pilot who narrowly escaped a kamikaze mission was Sadamu Komachi. He comments on the pointlessness of the kamikaze attacks. " There was no strategy other than making suicidal attacks, carrying bombs. The commanding officer had no other strategy.
It was a dying struggle. The Japanese chiefs of staff were struggling very hard. The strategy was must is master.'" So, the sacrifices of the kamikaze pilots were, ultimately, in vain. Yet, the incredible Japanese devotion to a cause, which was so evident through their actions, would see their nation rise from the ashes of defeat to be come a major player in the post war world.
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Kamikaze was written by the poet Beatrice Garland in a bid to explore the reasons why soldiers choose to, or are asked to, die for their country. Garland's poem Kamikaze presents the perspectives of both the kamikaze pilot and his daughter to show their different ideas about conflict. Kamikaze breakdown. Lines 1-3.
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Brief Summary. The poem Kamikaze explores a daughter's reflection on her connection and relationship to her father who was a Kamikaze pilot in WWII and decided not to complete his suicide mission. It follows her train of thought as she thinks about the journey her father would have made to go on the mission and she relates her father's ...
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In 'Kamikaze', the quote "remembered how he and his brothers…built cairns" may depict how the pilot…. chose national duty over personal duty. had internalised propaganda so that he did not question completing the mission. perceived a duty to himself to prioritise family and relationships. Q4. The free verse and enjambment in 'Kamikaze ...
Kamikaze Beatrice Garland Context notes (why these poems were written/what they are about). Both poems deal with personal conflict within cultural identity. Agard's poem deals with a conflict of what he wants to learn and is actually taught. Whilst Garland's poem focuses on cultural conflict within Japanese customs.
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In Beatrice Garland's Kamikaze, the speaker describes her father, a Kamikaze pilot, heading out one day on a suicide mission but then turning back. ... The speaker seems to have a mix of emotions about her father, for example, pride, shame, regret. At the end of the poem, the speaker questions whether the treatment he received when he returned ...
Similarities. Both explore guilt from war. Kamikaze: guilty for failing to carry out his suicide mission in order to honour his country. Remains: guilty for killing a possibly innocent man. Both explore life after war. Both emphasise the reality and horrors of war.
100% Essay Sample By Sophicly ... However, Kamikaze [s language is predominantly expressed in a matter-of-fact tone, particularly in the first five stanzas, which works together with the third person narrative perspective to establish a sense of distance and disownment from the subject
Both 'Kamikaze' by Beatrice Garland and 'Poppies' by Jane Weir present the past as a powerful force yet in different tones. The two poets, Garland and Weir, show that memory shapes and forces identity. However, 'Kamikaze' tends to view the past in general in a more positive light (despite the lugubrious title linking to ww2 fighter pilots) using a typically whimsical list of ...
In 1924, for example, the US Congress passed the Exclusion Act that prohibited further immigration from Japan. After WW1, Japan's economical situation worsened. The Great Kanto Earthquake of 1923 and the world wide depression of 1929 intensified the crisis.