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Ap language and composition, 1: synthesis essay- invasive species.

As time goes by, we seem to become more and more aware of our surroundings. We start to understand the world around us and our place in society, especially the link between us and nature. Nature holds a very fragile place in the world, and must hold a balance with modern society. But what happens when this delicate balance is thrown off? Invasive species (as understood from its name) are invaders of nature. They have the ability to take over anything they are exposed to and are difficult to control. Even though controlling these species is difficult, it can be beneficial to introduce invasive species to a new area. Government agencies and businesses must take careful thought into whether or not to transfer an invasive species to another country. In order to make an educated decision they must consider the benefits that the species will bring, if the species can be controlled, and the risk that comes with introducing the invader to a new location.

Invasive species usually have a bad name attached to them. Their reputation is filled with negativity and is known to simply be unwanted. But government agencies and businesses should consider all the benefits of introducing these species to new areas. With the aid of a new species in a controlled environment, the economy can take a turn for the better. Farming oceans are an up-and-coming trade that brings in many benefits such as “food security and poverty alleviation” to countries around the world (Source C). These underwater farms- commonly known as Aquaculture- also create many new jobs that are helpful in developing countries. The underwater farmers offer “a wide range of options for diversification of avenues for enhanced food production and income generation in many rural and peri-urban areas” by farming many different species not common to the area. Though introducing new species to different locations can cause problems, the benefits should always be considered with an open mind.

Control is the fragile barrier between success and chaos. And this barrier brings order to situations that would otherwise run themselves to destruction. Invasive species are particularly familiar with the destruction that comes from lack of control, and therefore the ability to control must be considered when transferring invasive species to new regions. Invasive species can be introduced intentionally or by accident. And either way, the species must be controlled before they cause catastrophic problems. When an invasive species is purposely introduced to a new region- even though the intentions may be good- the species itself can become a problem that affects many people and places. Dybas discusses the horrific effects caused by the accidental introduction of “SARS, a viral respiratory virus” to countries all over the world (Source B). She goes on to explain the many deaths that were caused by the virus, and the extreme measures that had to be taken to try and control the invader. Once SARS became an uncontrolled pandemic however, the virus spread like wildfire by mean of “planes, trains, ships, and automobiles” (Source B). Most invasive species show traits much like SARS, and can become a large problem if not properly controlled.

Taking a risk requires understanding possible consequences and a leap of faith. Risks should not be confused with stupidity, because risks are always taken with a logical reason to obtain positive results. And by balancing the pros and cons of a situation, we can decide whether or not a risk is worth taking. Government agencies and businesses must also weigh their pros and cons to decide if introducing an invasive species to a new area is worth the risk. The positives are clear: employment opportunities, economic growth, decrease in food-shortages. But what about the consequences? Ignorance to the risks of bringing in invasive species can lead to destruction like shown in Source A. The photo depicts a barren forest that instills a sense of loss and sadness, all because of an insect infestation. Even invasive species that seem to be a good idea come with consequences. Spotts discussed the cane toads becoming an invasive species of Australia even though “it seemed like a good idea at the time” (Source F). Toads that were originally supposed to battle beetles that attacked sugar-cane plants became invaders that spread throughout the entire continent, and “munching on almost everything in sight” (Source F). If government agencies and businesses show no ignorance and are sure to understand the possible consequences, an educated decision can be made on whether or not to introduce an invasive species.

As humans, we like to be comfortable with the events that surround us. We like to know what is going on and have the power to control the outcome of a situation. Government agencies and business DO have to power to control whether or not to introduce an invasive species to a new area. And with this power, considerations must be made in order to make an educated decision. They must understand the benefits the species can bring to the new area, know how to control the species, and be knowing of the consequences that come with introducing these species. And when all the considerations are made with a complete understanding of the invasive species, both ourselves and the world around us can benefit from the final decision.

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Synthesis: invasive species (1).

The health of an ecosystem is very important for all societies.  More and more species of plants and animals are becoming endangered due to a lack of control over nonnative species being imported.  However, some people claim that these nonnative plants and animals are beneficial to economies and resources.  The basic question is would allowing foreign species into an ecosystem consistently improve the ecosystems. If a business or government agency wished to transfer a nonindigenous species to foreign location, there are many things that they would need to consider.

Most likely, the main reason for bringing in a foreign species would be for some kind of benefit. Source C and source G both imply that bringing in these invasive species would bring in positive effects to the environment. Source C talks about how it was help increase aquatic food products through aquaculture. Source G discusses a grain produced by the Incas called quinoa. This grain is supposed to improve the life and health of people who consume it. But is it possible to have too much of a good thing?

This wouldn’t be the first time something went wrong with an invasive species. “It seemed like a good idea at the time” (Source F). In 1935, two different types of beetles were destroying Queensland’s fields. Logically, the growers decided to bring in toads who were supposed to fight the insects out of the sugar-cane fields. Instead of the toads just focusing their energy on the beetles, the invasive species ate everything they could see. The poison in the beetles also killed predators and pets who tried to eat them (source F).

Queensland isn’t the only place that had troubles with an invasive species. A viral respiratory illness known as SARS, which was first reported in February 2003 in Asia, is a disease that spread to more than two dozen countries in North America, South America, Europe and Asia. In early 2004, the US Department of Health and Human Services banned the import of civets (Source B). This is in hopes of decreasing the chances of acquiring the infection.

According to the sources, invasive species can potentially harm not only the plants and animals living in ecosystems, but is also a threat to human health. Even with the proof of the negative effects brought upon an environment, some people still believe that the risk is beneficial; and potentially it can be. It all depends on the chances the government is willing to take.

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AP English Language and Composition, commonly known as AP Lang, is one of the most engaging and popular AP classes offered at most high schools, with over 535,000 students taking the class . AP Lang tests your ability to analyze written pieces, synthesize information, write rhetorical essays, and create cohesive and concrete arguments. However, the class is rather challenging as only 62% of students were able to score a three or higher on the exam. 

The AP Lang exam has two sections. The first consists of 45 multiple choice questions which need to be completed in an hour. This portion counts for around 45% of your total score. These questions ask students to analyze written pieces and answer questions related to each respective passage.  All possible answer choices can be found within the text, and no prior knowledge of literature is needed to understand the passages.

The second section contains three free-response questions to be finished in under two hours and 15 minutes. This section counts for 55% of your score and includes the synthesis essay, the rhetorical essay, and the argumentative essay.

• The synthesis essay requires you to read 6-7 sources and create an argument using at least three sources.
• The rhetorical analysis essay requires you to describe how a piece of writing evokes specific meanings and symbolism.
• The argumentative essay requires you to pick a perspective of a debate and create an argument based on the evidence provided.

In this post, we will take a look at the AP Lang synthesis essay and discuss tips and tricks to master this part of the exam. We will also provide an example of a well-written essay for review.  

The AP Lang synthesis essay is the first of three essays included in the Free Response section of the AP Lang exam. The exam presents 6-7 sources that are organized around a specific topic, with two of those sources purely visual, including a single quantitative source (like a graph or pie chart). The remaining 4-5 sources are text-based, containing around 500 words each. It’s recommended that students spend an hour on this essay—15 minute reading period, 40 minutes writing, and 5 minutes of spare time to check over work.

Each synthesis essay has a topic that all the sources will relate to. A prompt will explaining the topic and provide some background, although the topics are usually broad so you will probably know something related to the issue. It will also present a claim that students will respond to in an essay format using information from at least three of the provided sources. You will need to take a stance, either agreeing or disagreeing with the position provided in the claim. 

According to the CollegeBoard, they are looking for essays that “combine different perspectives from sources to form a support of a coherent position.” This means that you must state your claim on the topic and highlight relationships between several sources that support your specific position on the topic. Additionally, you’ll need to cite clear evidence from your sources to prove your point.

The synthesis essay counts for six points on the AP Lang exam. Students can receive 0-1 points for writing a thesis statement, 0-4 based on the incorporation of evidence and commentary, and 0-1 points based on the sophistication of thought and demonstration of complex understanding.

While this essay seems extremely overwhelming, considering there are a total of three free-response essays to complete, with proper time management and practiced skills, this essay is manageable and straightforward. In order to enhance the time management aspect of the test to the best of your ability, it is essential to divide the essay up into five key steps.

Step 1: Analyze the Prompt

As soon as the clock starts, carefully read and analyze what the prompt asks from you. It might be helpful to markup the text to identify the most critical details. You should only spend around 2 minutes reading the prompt so you have enough time to read all the sources and figure out your argument. Don’t feel like you need to immediately pick your stance on the claim right after reading the prompt. You should read the sources before you commit to your argument.

Step 2: Read the Sources Carefully

Although you are only required to use 3 of the 6-7 sources provides, make sure you read ALL of the sources. This will allow you to better understand the topic and make the most educated decision of which sources to use in your essay. Since there are a lot of sources to get through, you will need to read quickly and carefully.

Annotating will be your best friend during the reading period. Highlight and mark important concepts or lines from each passage that would be helpful in your essay. Your argument will probably begin forming in your head as you go through the passages, so you will save yourself a lot of time later on if you take a few seconds to write down notes in the margins. After you’ve finished reading a source, reflect on whether the source defends, challenges, or qualifies your argument.

You will have around 13 minutes to read through all the sources, but it’s very possible you will finish earlier if you are a fast reader. Take the leftover time to start developing your thesis and organizing your thoughts into an outline so you have more time to write. 

Step 3: Write a Strong Thesis Statement 

In order to write a good thesis statement, all you have to do is decide your stance on the claim provided in the prompt and give an overview of your evidence. You essentially have three choices on how to frame your thesis statement: You can defend, challenge or qualify a claim that’s been provided by the prompt. 

• If you are defending the claim, your job will be to prove that the claim is correct .
• If you are challenging the claim, your job will be to prove that the claim is incorrect .
• If you choose to qualify the claim, your job will be to agree to a part of the claim and disagree with another part of the claim. 

A strong thesis statement will clearly state your stance without summarizing the issue or regurgitating the claim. The CollegeBoard is looking for a thesis statement that “states a defensible position and establishes a line of reasoning on the issue provided in the prompt.”

Step 4: Create a Minimal Essay Outline

Developing an outline might seem like a waste of time when you are up against the clock, but believe us, taking 5-10 minutes to outline your essay will be much more useful in the long run than jumping right into the essay.

Your outline should include your thesis statement and three main pieces of evidence that will constitute each body paragraph. Under each piece of evidence should be 2-3 details from the sources that you will use to back up your claim and some commentary on how that evidence proves your thesis.

Step 5: Write your Essay

Use the remaining 30-35 minutes to write your essay. This should be relatively easy if you took the time to mark up the sources and have a detailed outline.  Remember to add special consideration and emphasis to the commentary sections of the supporting arguments outlined in your thesis. These sentences are critical to the overall flow of the essay and where you will be explaining how the evidence supports or undermines the claim in the prompt.

Also, when referencing your sources, write the in-text citations as follows: “Source 1,” “Source 2,” “Source 3,” etc. Make sure to pay attention to which source is which in order to not incorrectly cite your sources. In-text citations will impact your score on the essay and are an integral part of the process.

After you finish writing, read through your essay for any grammatical errors or mistakes before you move onto the next essay.

Here are six must-have tips and tricks to get a good score on the synthesis essay:

• Cite at least four sources , even though the minimum requirement is three. Remember not to plagiarize and cite everything you use in your arguments.
• Make sure to develop a solid and clear thesis . Develop a stable stance for the claim and stick with it throughout the entire paper.
• Don’t summarize the sources. The summary of the sources does not count as an argument. 
• You don’t necessarily have to agree with the sources in order to cite them. Using a source to support a counterargument is still a good use of a source.
• Cite the sources that you understand entirely . If you don’t, it could come back to bite you in the end. 
• Use small quotes , do not quote entire paragraphs. Make sure the quote does not disrupt the flow or grammar of the sentence you write. 

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Here is an example prompt and essay from 2019 that received 5 of the 6 total points available:

In response to our society’s increasing demand for energy, large-scale wind power has drawn attention from governments and consumers as a potential alternative to traditional materials that fuel our power grids, such as coal, oil, natural gas, water, or even newer sources such as nuclear or solar power. Yet the establishment of large-scale, commercial-grade wind farms is often the subject of controversy for a variety of reasons.

Carefully read the six sources, found on the AP English Language and Composition 2019 Exam (Question 1), including the introductory information for each source. Write an essay that synthesizes material from at least three of the sources and develops your position on the most important factors that an individual or agency should consider when deciding whether to establish a wind farm.

Source A (photo)

Source B (Layton)

Source C (Seltenrich)

Source D (Brown)

Source E (Rule)

Source F (Molla)

In your response you should do the following:

• Respond to the prompt with a thesis presents a defensible position.
• Select and use evidence from at least 3 of the provided sources to support your line of reasoning. Indicate clearly the sources used through direct quotation, paraphrase, or summary. Sources may be cited as Source A, Source B, etc., or by using the description in parentheses.
• Explain how the evidence supports your line of reasoning.
• Use appropriate grammar and punctuation in communicating your argument.

[1] The situation has been known for years, and still very little is being done: alternative power is the only way to reliably power the changing world. The draw of power coming from industry and private life is overwhelming current sources of non-renewable power, and with dwindling supplies of fossil fuels, it is merely a matter of time before coal and gas fuel plants are no longer in operation. So one viable alternative is wind power. But as with all things, there are pros and cons. The main factors for power companies to consider when building wind farms are environmental boon, aesthetic, and economic factors.

[2] The environmental benefits of using wind power are well-known and proven. Wind power is, as qualified by Source B, undeniably clean and renewable. From their production requiring very little in the way of dangerous materials to their lack of fuel, besides that which occurs naturally, wind power is by far one of the least environmentally impactful sources of power available. In addition, wind power by way of gearbox and advanced blade materials, has the highest percentage of energy retention. According to Source F, wind power retains 1,164% of the energy put into the system – meaning that it increases the energy converted from fuel (wind) to electricity 10 times! No other method of electricity production is even half that efficient. The efficiency and clean nature of wind power are important to consider, especially because they contribute back to power companies economically.

[3] Economically, wind power is both a boon and a bone to electric companies and other users. For consumers, wind power is very cheap, leading to lower bills than from any other source. Consumers also get an indirect reimbursement by way of taxes (Source D). In one Texan town, McCamey, tax revenue increased 30% from a wind farm being erected in the town. This helps to finance improvements to the town. But, there is no doubt that wind power is also hurting the power companies. Although, as renewable power goes, wind is incredibly cheap, it is still significantly more expensive than fossil fuels. So, while it is helping to cut down on emissions, it costs electric companies more than traditional fossil fuel plants. While the general economic trend is positive, there are some setbacks which must be overcome before wind power can take over as truly more effective than fossil fuels.

[4] Aesthetics may be the greatest setback for power companies. Although there may be significant economic and environmental benefit to wind power, people will always fight to preserve pure, unspoiled land. Unfortunately, not much can be done to improve the visual aesthetics of the turbines. White paint is the most common choice because it “[is] associated with cleanliness.” (Source E). But, this can make it stand out like a sore thumb, and make the gargantuan machines seem more out of place. The site can also not be altered because it affects generating capacity. Sound is almost worse of a concern because it interrupts personal productivity by interrupting people’s sleep patterns. One thing for power companies to consider is working with turbine manufacturing to make the machines less aesthetically impactful, so as to garner greater public support.

[5] As with most things, wind power has no easy answer. It is the responsibility of the companies building them to weigh the benefits and the consequences. But, by balancing economics, efficiency, and aesthetics, power companies can create a solution which balances human impact with environmental preservation.

More examples can be found here at College Board.

While AP Scores help to boost your weighted GPA, or give you the option to get college credit, AP Scores don’t have a strong effect on your admissions chances . However, colleges can still see your self-reported scores, so you might not want to automatically send scores to colleges if they are lower than a 3. That being said, admissions officers care far more about your grade in an AP class than your score on the exam.

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