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How To Write A Dissertation Or Thesis
8 Straightforward Steps + Examples
By: Derek Jansen (MBA) Expert Reviewed By: Dr Eunice Rautenbach | June 2020
How To Write A Dissertation: 8 Steps
- Clearly understand what a dissertation (or thesis) is
- Find a unique and valuable research topic
- Craft a convincing research proposal
- Write up a strong introduction chapter
- Review the existing literature and compile a literature review
- Design a rigorous research strategy and undertake your own research
- Present the findings of your research
- Draw a conclusion and discuss the implications
Step 1: Understand exactly what a dissertation is
This probably sounds like a no-brainer, but all too often, students come to us for help with their research and the underlying issue is that they donât fully understand what a dissertation (or thesis) actually is.
So, what is a dissertation?
At its simplest, a dissertation or thesis is a formal piece of research , reflecting the standard research process . But what is the standard research process, you ask? The research process involves 4 key steps:
- Ask a very specific, well-articulated question (s) (your research topic)
- See what other researchers have said about it (if theyâve already answered it)
- If they havenât answered it adequately, undertake your own data collection and analysis in a scientifically rigorous fashion
- Answer your original question(s), based on your analysis findings
In short, the research process is simply about asking and answering questions in a systematic fashion . This probably sounds pretty obvious, but people often think theyâve done âresearchâ, when in fact what they have done is:
- Started with a vague, poorly articulated question
- Not taken the time to see what research has already been done regarding the question
- Collected data and opinions that support their gut and undertaken a flimsy analysis
- Drawn a shaky conclusion, based on that analysis
If you want to see the perfect example of this in action, look out for the next Facebook post where someone claims theyâve done âresearchâ⌠All too often, people consider reading a few blog posts to constitute research. Its no surprise then that what they end up with is an opinion piece, not research. Okay, okay â Iâll climb off my soapbox now.
The key takeaway here is that a dissertation (or thesis) is a formal piece of research, reflecting the research process. Itâs not an opinion piece , nor a place to push your agenda or try to convince someone of your position. Writing a good dissertation involves asking a question and taking a systematic, rigorous approach to answering it.
If you understand this and are comfortable leaving your opinions or preconceived ideas at the door, youâre already off to a good start!
Step 2: Find a unique, valuable research topic
As we saw, the first step of the research process is to ask a specific, well-articulated question. In other words, you need to find a research topic that asks a specific question or set of questions (these are called research questions ). Sounds easy enough, right? All youâve got to do is identify a question or two and youâve got a winning research topic. Well, not quiteâŚ
A good dissertation or thesis topic has a few important attributes. Specifically, a solid research topic should be:
Letâs take a closer look at these:
Attribute #1: Clear
Your research topic needs to be crystal clear about what youâre planning to research, what you want to know, and within what context. There shouldnât be any ambiguity or vagueness about what youâll research.
Hereâs an example of a clearly articulated research topic:
An analysis of consumer-based factors influencing organisational trust in British low-cost online equity brokerage firms.
As you can see in the example, its crystal clear what will be analysed (factors impacting organisational trust), amongst who (consumers) and in what context (British low-cost equity brokerage firms, based online).
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Attribute #2: Â Unique
Your research should be asking a question(s) that hasnât been asked before, or that hasnât been asked in a specific context (for example, in a specific country or industry).
For example, sticking organisational trust topic above, itâs quite likely that organisational trust factors in the UK have been investigated before, but the context (online low-cost equity brokerages) could make this research unique. Therefore, the context makes this research original.
One caveat when using context as the basis for originality – you need to have a good reason to suspect that your findings in this context might be different from the existing research â otherwise, thereâs no reason to warrant researching it.
Attribute #3: Important
Simply asking a unique or original question is not enough â the question needs to create value. In other words, successfully answering your research questions should provide some value to the field of research or the industry. You canât research something just to satisfy your curiosity. It needs to make some form of contribution either to research or industry.
For example, researching the factors influencing consumer trust would create value by enabling businesses to tailor their operations and marketing to leverage factors that promote trust. In other words, it would have a clear benefit to industry.
So, how do you go about finding a unique and valuable research topic? We explain that in detail in this video post â How To Find A Research Topic . Yeah, weâve got you covered đ
Step 3: Write a convincing research proposal
Once youâve pinned down a high-quality research topic, the next step is to convince your university to let you research it. No matter how awesome you think your topic is, it still needs to get the rubber stamp before you can move forward with your research. The research proposal is the tool youâll use for this job.
So, whatâs in a research proposal?
The main âjobâ of a research proposal is to convince your university, advisor or committee that your research topic is worthy of approval. But convince them of what? Well, this varies from university to university, but generally, they want to see that:
- You have a clearly articulated, unique and important topic (this might sound familiarâŚ)
- Youâve done some initial reading of the existing literature relevant to your topic (i.e. a literature review)
- You have a provisional plan in terms of how you will collect data and analyse it (i.e. a methodology)
At the proposal stage, it’s (generally) not expected that youâve extensively reviewed the existing literature , but you will need to show that youâve done enough reading to identify a clear gap for original (unique) research. Similarly, they generally donât expect that you have a rock-solid research methodology mapped out, but you should have an idea of whether youâll be undertaking qualitative or quantitative analysis , and how youâll collect your data (weâll discuss this in more detail later).
Long story short – donât stress about having every detail of your research meticulously thought out at the proposal stage â this will develop as you progress through your research. However, you do need to show that youâve âdone your homeworkâ and that your research is worthy of approval .
So, how do you go about crafting a high-quality, convincing proposal? We cover that in detail in this video post â How To Write A Top-Class Research Proposal . We’ve also got a video walkthrough of two proposal examples here .
Step 4: Craft a strong introduction chapter
Once your proposalâs been approved, its time to get writing your actual dissertation or thesis! The good news is that if you put the time into crafting a high-quality proposal, youâve already got a head start on your first three chapters â introduction, literature review and methodology – as you can use your proposal as the basis for these.
Handy sidenote – our free dissertation & thesis template is a great way to speed up your dissertation writing journey.
Whatâs the introduction chapter all about?
The purpose of the introduction chapter is to set the scene for your research (dare I say, to introduce itâŚ) so that the reader understands what youâll be researching and why itâs important. In other words, it covers the same ground as the research proposal in that it justifies your research topic.
What goes into the introduction chapter?
This can vary slightly between universities and degrees, but generally, the introduction chapter will include the following:
- A brief background to the study, explaining the overall area of research
- A problem statement , explaining what the problem is with the current state of research (in other words, where the knowledge gap exists)
- Your research questions â in other words, the specific questions your study will seek to answer (based on the knowledge gap)
- The significance of your study â in other words, why itâs important and how its findings will be useful in the world
As you can see, this all about explaining the âwhatâ and the âwhyâ of your research (as opposed to the âhowâ). So, your introduction chapter is basically the salesman of your study, âsellingâ your research to the first-time reader and (hopefully) getting them interested to read more.
Step 5: Undertake an in-depth literature review
As I mentioned earlier, youâll need to do some initial review of the literature in Steps 2 and 3 to find your research gap and craft a convincing research proposal â but thatâs just scratching the surface. Once you reach the literature review stage of your dissertation or thesis, you need to dig a lot deeper into the existing research and write up a comprehensive literature review chapter.
Whatâs the literature review all about?
There are two main stages in the literature review process:
Literature Review Step 1: Reading up
The first stage is for you to deep dive into the existing literature (journal articles, textbook chapters, industry reports, etc) to gain an in-depth understanding of the current state of research regarding your topic. While you donât need to read every single article, you do need to ensure that you cover all literature that is related to your core research questions, and create a comprehensive catalogue of that literature , which youâll use in the next step.
Reading and digesting all the relevant literature is a time consuming and intellectually demanding process. Many students underestimate just how much work goes into this step, so make sure that you allocate a good amount of time for this when planning out your research. Thankfully, there are ways to fast track the process â be sure to check out this article covering how to read journal articles quickly .
Literature Review Step 2: Writing up
Once youâve worked through the literature and digested it all, youâll need to write up your literature review chapter. Many students make the mistake of thinking that the literature review chapter is simply a summary of what other researchers have said. While this is partly true, a literature review is much more than just a summary. To pull off a good literature review chapter, youâll need to achieve at least 3 things:
- You need to synthesise the existing research , not just summarise it. In other words, you need to show how different pieces of theory fit together, whatâs agreed on by researchers, whatâs not.
- You need to highlight a research gap that your research is going to fill. In other words, youâve got to outline the problem so that your research topic can provide a solution.
- You need to use the existing research to inform your methodology and approach to your own research design. For example, you might use questions or Likert scales from previous studies in your your own survey design .
As you can see, a good literature review is more than just a summary of the published research. Itâs the foundation on which your own research is built, so it deserves a lot of love and attention. Take the time to craft a comprehensive literature review with a suitable structure .
But, how do I actually write the literature review chapter, you ask? We cover that in detail in this video post .
Step 6: Carry out your own research
Once youâve completed your literature review and have a sound understanding of the existing research, its time to develop your own research (finally!). Youâll design this research specifically so that you can find the answers to your unique research question.
There are two steps here â designing your research strategy and executing on it:
1 â Design your research strategy
The first step is to design your research strategy and craft a methodology chapter . I wonât get into the technicalities of the methodology chapter here, but in simple terms, this chapter is about explaining the âhowâ of your research. If you recall, the introduction and literature review chapters discussed the âwhatâ and the âwhyâ, so it makes sense that the next point to cover is the âhowâ âthatâs what the methodology chapter is all about.
In this section, youâll need to make firm decisions about your research design. This includes things like:
- Your research philosophy (e.g. positivism or interpretivism )
- Your overall methodology (e.g. qualitative , quantitative or mixed methods)
- Your data collection strategy (e.g. interviews , focus groups, surveys)
- Your data analysis strategy (e.g. content analysis , correlation analysis, regression)
If these words have got your head spinning, donât worry! Weâll explain these in plain language in other posts. Itâs not essential that you understand the intricacies of research design (yet!). The key takeaway here is that youâll need to make decisions about how youâll design your own research, and youâll need to describe (and justify) your decisions in your methodology chapter.
2 â Execute: Collect and analyse your data
Once youâve worked out your research design, youâll put it into action and start collecting your data. This might mean undertaking interviews, hosting an online survey or any other data collection method. Data collection can take quite a bit of time (especially if you host in-person interviews), so be sure to factor sufficient time into your project plan for this. Oftentimes, things donât go 100% to plan (for example, you donât get as many survey responses as you hoped for), so bake a little extra time into your budget here.
Once youâve collected your data, youâll need to do some data preparation before you can sink your teeth into the analysis. For example:
- If you carry out interviews or focus groups, youâll need to transcribe your audio data to text (i.e. a Word document).
- If you collect quantitative survey data, youâll need to clean up your data and get it into the right format for whichever analysis software you use (for example, SPSS, R or STATA).
Once youâve completed your data prep, youâll undertake your analysis, using the techniques that you described in your methodology. Depending on what you find in your analysis, you might also do some additional forms of analysis that you hadnât planned for. For example, you might see something in the data that raises new questions or that requires clarification with further analysis.
The type(s) of analysis that youâll use depend entirely on the nature of your research and your research questions. For example:
- If your research if exploratory in nature, youâll often use qualitative analysis techniques .
- If your research is confirmatory in nature, youâll often use quantitative analysis techniques
- If your research involves a mix of both, you might use a mixed methods approach
Again, if these words have got your head spinning, donât worry! Weâll explain these concepts and techniques in other posts. The key takeaway is simply that thereâs no âone size fits allâ for research design and methodology â it all depends on your topic, your research questions and your data. So, donât be surprised if your study colleagues take a completely different approach to yours.
Step 7: Present your findings
Once youâve completed your analysis, itâs time to present your findings (finally!). In a dissertation or thesis, youâll typically present your findings in two chapters – the results chapter and the discussion chapter .
Whatâs the difference between the results chapter and the discussion chapter?
While these two chapters are similar, the results chapter generally just presents the processed data neatly and clearly without interpretation, while the discussion chapter explains the story the data are telling – in other words, it provides your interpretation of the results.
For example, if you were researching the factors that influence consumer trust, you might have used a quantitative approach to identify the relationship between potential factors (e.g. perceived integrity and competence of the organisation) and consumer trust. In this case:
- Your results chapter would just present the results of the statistical tests. For example, correlation results or differences between groups. In other words, the processed numbers.
- Your discussion chapter would explain what the numbers mean in relation to your research question(s). For example, Factor 1 has a weak relationship with consumer trust, while Factor 2 has a strong relationship.
Depending on the university and degree, these two chapters (results and discussion) are sometimes merged into one , so be sure to check with your institution what their preference is. Regardless of the chapter structure, this section is about presenting the findings of your research in a clear, easy to understand fashion.
Importantly, your discussion here needs to link back to your research questions (which you outlined in the introduction or literature review chapter). In other words, it needs to answer the key questions you asked (or at least attempt to answer them).
For example, if we look at the sample research topic:
In this case, the discussion section would clearly outline which factors seem to have a noteworthy influence on organisational trust. By doing so, they are answering the overarching question and fulfilling the purpose of the research .
Step 8: The Final Step Draw a conclusion and discuss the implications
Last but not least, youâll need to wrap up your research with the conclusion chapter . In this chapter, youâll bring your research full circle by highlighting the key findings of your study and explaining what the implications of these findings are.
What exactly are key findings? The key findings are those findings which directly relate to your original research questions and overall research objectives (which you discussed in your introduction chapter). The implications, on the other hand, explain what your findings mean for industry, or for research in your area.
Sticking with the consumer trust topic example, the conclusion might look something like this:
Key findings
This study set out to identify which factors influence consumer-based trust in British low-cost online equity brokerage firms. The results suggest that the following factors have a large impact on consumer trust:
While the following factors have a very limited impact on consumer trust:
Notably, within the 25-30 age groups, Factors E had a noticeably larger impact, which may be explained byâŚ
Implications
The findings having noteworthy implications for British low-cost online equity brokers. Specifically:
The large impact of Factors X and Y implies that brokers need to considerâŚ.
The limited impact of Factor E implies that brokers need toâŚ
As you can see, the conclusion chapter is basically explaining the âwhatâ (what your study found) and the âso what?â (what the findings mean for the industry or research). This brings the study full circle and closes off the document.
Letâs recap â how to write a dissertation or thesis
Youâre still with me? Impressive! I know that this post was a long one, but hopefully youâve learnt a thing or two about how to write a dissertation or thesis, and are now better equipped to start your own research.
To recap, the 8 steps to writing a quality dissertation (or thesis) are as follows:
- Understand what a dissertation (or thesis) is â a research project that follows the research process.
- Find a unique (original) and important research topic
- Craft a convincing dissertation or thesis research proposal
- Write a clear, compelling introduction chapter
- Undertake a thorough review of the existing research and write up a literature review
- Undertake your own research
- Present and interpret your findings
Once you’ve wrapped up the core chapters, all that’s typically left is the abstract , reference list and appendices. As always, be sure to check with your university if they have any additional requirements in terms of structure or content.
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How to Write a Thesis Statement (Full Guide + 60 Examples)
Crafting the perfect thesis statement is an art form that sets the foundation for your entire paper.
Here is how to write a thesis statement:
Write a thesis statement by clearly stating your topic, expressing your position, and providing key points. For example: “Social media impacts teens by influencing self-esteem, enabling cyberbullying, and shaping social interactions.” Be specific, concise, and arguable.
This ultimate guide will break down everything you need to know about how to write a thesis statement, plus 60 examples.
What Is a Thesis Statement?
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A thesis statement is a concise summary of the main point or claim of an essay, research paper, or other piece of academic writing.
It presents the topic of your paper and your position on the topic, ideally in a single sentence.
Think of it as the roadmap to your paperâit guides your readers through your arguments and provides a clear direction.
Key Elements of a Thesis Statement
- Clarity: Your thesis should be clear and specific.
- Position: It should convey your stance on the topic.
- Argument: The statement should make a claim that others might dispute.
Types of Thesis Statements
There are various types of thesis statements depending on the kind of paper you’re writing.
Here are the main ones:
- Standard Method – This is the classic thesis statement used in many academic essays. It provides a straightforward approach, clearly stating the main argument or claim and outlining the supporting points.
- Research Paper – Designed for research papers, this type involves extensive research and evidence. It presents a hypothesis or a central argument based on your research findings.
- Informative Essay – Used for essays that aim to inform or explain a topic. It provides a clear summary of what the reader will learn.
- Persuasive Essay – For essays meant to persuade or convince the reader of a particular point of view. It clearly states your position and outlines your main arguments.
- Compare and Contrast Essay – Used when comparing two or more subjects. It highlights the similarities and differences between the subjects and presents a clear argument based on these comparisons.
- Analytical Essay – Breaks down an issue or idea into its component parts, evaluates the issue or idea, and presents this breakdown and evaluation to the audience.
- Argumentative Essay – Makes a claim about a topic and justifies this claim with specific evidence. Itâs similar to the persuasive essay but usually requires more evidence and a more formal tone.
- Expository Essay – Explains or describes a topic in a straightforward, logical manner. It provides a balanced analysis of a subject based on facts without opinions.
- Narrative Essay – Tells a story or relates an event. The thesis statement for a narrative essay usually highlights the main point or lesson of the story.
- Cause and Effect Essay – Explores the causes of a particular event or situation and its effects. It provides a clear argument about the cause and effect relationship.
How to Write a Thesis Statement (Standard Method)
Writing a standard thesis statement involves a few straightforward steps.
Here’s a detailed guide:
- Identify Your Topic: What is your essay about?
- Take a Stance: What is your position on the topic?
- Outline Your Main Points: What are the key arguments that support your stance?
- Combine All Elements: Formulate a single, coherent sentence that encompasses all the above points.
- “Social media has a significant impact on teenagers because it influences their self-esteem, provides a platform for cyberbullying, and shapes their social interactions.”
- “Climate change is a pressing issue that requires immediate action because it threatens global ecosystems, endangers human health, and disrupts economies.”
- “The rise of remote work is transforming the modern workplace by increasing flexibility, reducing overhead costs, and enhancing work-life balance.”
- “School uniforms should be mandatory in public schools as they promote equality, reduce bullying, and simplify the morning routine.”
- “Digital literacy is essential in today’s world because it improves communication, enhances job prospects, and enables informed decision-making.”
How to Write a Thesis Statement for a Research Paper
Research papers require a more detailed and evidence-based thesis.
Here’s how to craft one:
- Start with a Research Question: What are you trying to find out?
- Conduct Preliminary Research: Gather evidence and sources.
- Formulate a Hypothesis: Based on your research, what do you think will happen?
- Refine Your Thesis: Make it specific and arguable.
- “The implementation of renewable energy sources can significantly reduce carbon emissions in urban areas, as evidenced by case studies in cities like Copenhagen and Vancouver.”
- “Genetically modified crops have the potential to improve food security, but their impact on biodiversity and human health requires further investigation.”
- “The use of artificial intelligence in healthcare can improve diagnostic accuracy and patient outcomes, but ethical concerns about data privacy and algorithmic bias must be addressed.”
- “Urban green spaces contribute to mental well-being and community cohesion, as demonstrated by longitudinal studies in various metropolitan areas.”
- “Microplastic pollution in oceans poses a severe threat to marine life and human health, highlighting the need for stricter waste management policies.”
How to Write a Thesis Statement for an Essay
You’ll write thesis statements a little differently for different kinds of essays.
Informative Essay
- Choose Your Topic: What are you informing your readers about?
- Outline Key Points: What are the main pieces of information?
- Draft Your Statement: Clearly state the purpose and main points.
- “The process of photosynthesis is essential for plant life as it converts light energy into chemical energy, produces oxygen, and is the basis for the food chain.”
- “The human digestive system is a complex series of organs and glands that process food, absorb nutrients, and eliminate waste.”
- “The Industrial Revolution was a period of major technological advancement and social change that reshaped the economies and societies of Europe and North America.”
- “The history of the internet from its early development in the 1960s to its current role in global communication and commerce is a fascinating journey of innovation and transformation.”
- “The impact of climate change on Arctic ecosystems is profound, affecting wildlife, indigenous communities, and global weather patterns.”
Persuasive Essay
- Identify Your Position: What are you trying to convince your reader of?
- Gather Supporting Evidence: What evidence backs up your position?
- Combine Elements: Make a clear, arguable statement.
- “Implementing a four-day workweek can improve productivity and employee well-being, as supported by studies from Iceland and Japan.”
- “The death penalty should be abolished as it is inhumane, does not deter crime, and risks executing innocent people.”
- “Public transportation should be made free to reduce traffic congestion, decrease pollution, and promote social equity.”
- “Recycling should be mandatory to conserve natural resources, reduce landfill waste, and protect the environment.”
- “Vaccination should be mandatory to protect public health and prevent the spread of contagious diseases.”
Compare and Contrast Essay
- Choose Subjects to Compare: What are the two (or more) subjects?
- Determine the Basis of Comparison: What specific aspects are you comparing?
- Draft the Thesis: Clearly state the subjects and the comparison.
- “While both solar and wind energy are renewable sources, solar energy is more versatile and can be used in a wider variety of environments.”
- “Although both capitalism and socialism aim to improve economic welfare, capitalism emphasizes individual freedom while socialism focuses on collective equality.”
- “Traditional classroom education and online learning each offer unique benefits, but online learning provides greater flexibility and access to resources.”
- “The novels ‘1984’ by George Orwell and ‘Brave New World’ by Aldous Huxley both depict dystopian societies, but ‘1984’ focuses on totalitarianism while ‘Brave New World’ explores the dangers of technological control.”
- “While iOS and Android operating systems offer similar functionality, iOS provides a more streamlined user experience, whereas Android offers greater customization options.”
How to Write a Thesis Statement for an Analytical Essay
An analytical essay breaks down an issue or idea into its component parts, evaluates the issue or idea, and presents this breakdown and evaluation to the audience.
- Choose Your Topic: What will you analyze?
- Identify Key Components: What are the main parts of your analysis?
- Formulate Your Thesis: Combine the components into a coherent statement.
- “Shakespeare’s ‘Hamlet’ explores themes of madness and revenge through the complex characterization of Hamlet and his interactions with other characters.”
- “The economic policies of the New Deal addressed the Great Depression by implementing financial reforms, creating job opportunities, and providing social welfare programs.”
- “The symbolism in ‘The Great Gatsby’ by F. Scott Fitzgerald reflects the moral decay and social stratification of the Jazz Age.”
- “The narrative structure of ‘Inception’ uses nonlinear storytelling to explore the complexities of dreams and reality.”
- “The use of color in Wes Anderson’s films enhances the whimsical and nostalgic tone of his storytelling.”
How to Write a Thesis Statement for an Argumentative Essay
An argumentative essay makes a claim about a topic and justifies this claim with specific evidence.
Itâs similar to the persuasive essay but usually requires more evidence and a more formal tone.
- Choose Your Topic: What are you arguing about?
- Gather Evidence: What evidence supports your claim?
- Formulate Your Thesis: Make a clear, evidence-based statement.
- “Climate change is primarily driven by human activities, such as deforestation and the burning of fossil fuels, which increase greenhouse gas emissions.”
- “The benefits of universal healthcare outweigh the costs, as it ensures equal access to medical services, reduces overall healthcare expenses, and improves public health.”
- “The death penalty should be abolished because it violates human rights, is not a deterrent to crime, and risks the execution of innocent people.”
- “Animal testing for cosmetics should be banned as it is unethical, unnecessary, and alternatives are available.”
- “Net neutrality should be maintained to ensure a free and open internet, preventing service providers from prioritizing or blocking content.”
How to Write a Thesis Statement for an Expository Essay
An expository essay explains or describes a topic in a straightforward, logical manner.
It provides a balanced analysis of a subject based on facts without opinions.
- Choose Your Topic: What are you explaining or describing?
- Outline Key Points: What are the main facts or components?
- Formulate Your Thesis: Combine the elements into a clear statement.
- “The water cycle consists of evaporation, condensation, and precipitation, which are essential for maintaining the earth’s water balance.”
- “The human respiratory system is responsible for taking in oxygen and expelling carbon dioxide through a series of organs, including the lungs, trachea, and diaphragm.”
- “Photosynthesis in plants involves the absorption of light energy by chlorophyll, which converts carbon dioxide and water into glucose and oxygen.”
- “The structure of DNA is a double helix composed of nucleotides, which are the building blocks of genetic information.”
- “The process of mitosis ensures that cells divide correctly, allowing for growth, repair, and reproduction in living organisms.”
How to Write a Thesis Statement for a Narrative Essay
A narrative essay tells a story or relates an event.
The thesis statement for a narrative essay usually highlights the main point or lesson of the story.
- Identify the Main Point: What is the main lesson or theme of your story?
- Outline Key Events: What are the key events that support this point?
- Formulate Your Thesis: Combine the main point and events into a coherent statement.
- “Overcoming my fear of public speaking in high school taught me the value of confidence and perseverance.”
- “My summer volunteering at a wildlife rescue center showed me the importance of compassion and teamwork.”
- “A family road trip across the country provided me with unforgettable memories and a deeper appreciation for our diverse landscapes.”
- “Moving to a new city for college challenged me to adapt to new environments and build independence.”
- “A childhood friendship that ended in betrayal taught me the importance of trust and resilience.”
How to Write a Thesis Statement for a Cause and Effect Essay
A cause and effect essay explores the causes of a particular event or situation and its effects.
It provides a clear argument about the cause and effect relationship.
- Identify the Event or Situation: What are you analyzing?
- Determine the Causes: What are the reasons behind this event or situation?
- Identify the Effects: What are the consequences?
- Formulate Your Thesis: Combine the causes and effects into a coherent statement.
- “The rise in global temperatures is primarily caused by human activities, such as burning fossil fuels, and leads to severe weather patterns and rising sea levels.”
- “The introduction of invasive species in an ecosystem disrupts the balance and leads to the decline of native species.”
- “Economic recession is caused by a combination of factors, including high unemployment rates and declining consumer confidence, and results in reduced business investments and government spending.”
- “Prolonged exposure to screen time can cause digital eye strain and sleep disturbances, affecting overall health and productivity.”
- “Deforestation contributes to soil erosion and loss of biodiversity, leading to the degradation of ecosystems and reduced agricultural productivity.”
How to Write a Good Thesis Statement
Writing a good thesis statement is all about clarity and specificity.
Hereâs a formula to help you:
- State the Topic: What are you writing about?
- Express Your Opinion: What do you think about the topic?
- Provide a Reason: Why do you think this way?
- “Remote work is beneficial because it offers flexibility, reduces commuting time, and increases job satisfaction.”
- “Regular exercise is essential for maintaining physical and mental health as it boosts energy levels, improves mood, and reduces the risk of chronic diseases.”
- “Reading fiction enhances empathy by allowing readers to experience different perspectives and emotions.”
- “A plant-based diet is advantageous for both personal health and environmental sustainability.”
- “Learning a second language enhances cognitive abilities and opens up cultural and professional opportunities.”
Check out this video about how to write a strong thesis statement:
How to Write a Thesis Statement (Formula + Template)
Use this simple formula to craft your thesis statement:
[Main Topic] + [Your Opinion/Position] + [Reason/Key Points]
Template: “__________ (main topic) has __________ (your opinion) because __________ (reason/key points).”
- “Electric cars are the future of transportation because they reduce greenhouse gas emissions, lower fuel costs, and require less maintenance.”
- “Social media platforms should implement stricter privacy controls because user data is vulnerable to breaches, exploitation, and misuse.”
- “Higher education should be more affordable to ensure equal access and promote social mobility.”
- “Television news often fails to provide balanced coverage, leading to public misinformation.”
- “Volunteer work should be encouraged in schools to foster community engagement and personal development.”
Thesis Statement Tips
Writing a strong thesis statement is crucial for a successful essay. Here are some tips to help you craft a killer thesis statement:
- Be Specific: Avoid vague language. Make sure your thesis statement clearly defines your argument or main point.
- Be Concise: Keep it to one or two sentences. Your thesis statement should be brief and to the point.
- Make It Arguable: Ensure that your thesis statement presents a claim or argument that can be disputed.
- Place It Appropriately: Typically, your thesis statement should be placed at the end of your introduction paragraph.
- Revise and Refine: Donât be afraid to revise your thesis statement as you write and refine your essay. It should evolve as your ideas develop.
Common Thesis Statement Errors
Avoid these common errors when crafting your thesis statement:
- Too Broad: A thesis statement that is too broad makes it difficult to focus your essay. Narrow it down to a specific point.
- Too Vague: Avoid vague language that lacks specificity. Be clear about what youâre arguing.
- Lacks an Argument: Ensure that your thesis statement makes a clear argument or claim. Avoid statements that are purely factual or descriptive.
- Too Complex: A thesis statement should be straightforward and easy to understand. Avoid overly complex sentences.
- Off-Topic: Make sure your thesis statement is directly related to the topic of your essay. Stay on track.
How Do You Start a Thesis Statement?
Starting a thesis statement involves using clear and concise language that sets the stage for your argument.
Here are some exact words and phrases to begin with:
- “The purpose of this paper is to…”
- “This essay will argue that…”
- “In this essay, I will demonstrate that…”
- “The central idea of this paper is…”
- “This research aims to prove that…”
- “This study focuses on…”
- “This analysis will show that…”
- “The main argument presented in this paper is…”
- “The goal of this essay is to…”
- “Through this research, it will be shown that…”
How Long Should a Thesis Statement Be?
A thesis statement should be clear and concise, typically one to two sentences long.
Aim for 20 to 30 words, ensuring it includes the main topic, your position, and the key points that will be covered in your paper.
This provides a focused and precise summary of your argument, making it easier for readers to understand the main direction of your essay or research paper.
While brevity is essential, it’s also crucial to provide enough detail to convey the scope of your argument.
Avoid overly complex sentences that can confuse readers. Instead, strive for a balance between clarity and comprehensiveness, ensuring your thesis statement is straightforward and informative.
Summary Table of Thesis Statement Writing
Final thoughts: how to write a thesis statement.
Writing a strong thesis statement is the cornerstone of a successful paper.
It guides your writing and helps your readers understand your argument. Remember to be clear, specific, and concise. With practice, you’ll master the art of crafting killer thesis statements.
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How to Write a Thesis: A Guide for Masterâs Students
By Dr. David James Kritz | 09/29/2023
Let’s face it. Researching and writing a quality thesis can be daunting for many reasons, including:
- A lack of knowledge on where to begin the assignment process
- What key arguments and questions to ask in relation to the thesis statement
- How to get to the data and subject matter
- How to cope with writer's block, a professor's expectations, and time constraints
According to Dictionary.com , a thesis is “a proposition stated or put forward for consideration, especially one to be discussed and proved or to be maintained against objections.”
Therefore, avoiding a weak thesis statement is vital when writing an applicable paper. Thesis statement examples are pivotal in understanding this position.
Currently, master’s students who select the thesis capstone within American Public University's School of Security and Global Studies intelligence master's degree program must choose a relevant subject.
Typically, these students must write a thesis statement that consists of at least one compelling sentence and at least 50 pages of content, then turn it in within 16 weeks.
I have taught graduate students, primarily from the U.S. Intelligence Community, how to conduct research for over eight years.
Based on my experience as an educator, I have 10 tips for creating good thesis statements. These tips, combined with some apt thesis statement examples, can elucidate the process.
Tip #1 for Effective Thesis Statements: Select an Appropriate Topic and Research Question
First, it is necessary to use a lengthy thinking process before developing a good thesis statement, whether it’s an expository thesis statement or an argumentative one. This process begins with many questions related to how to write a thesis statement, such as:
- What would be an interesting topic?
- What would be an original and interesting research question?
- What will be the main claim, key arguments, and central idea of the thesis statement?
- What is an appropriate research design?
- How will I get to the data to address my central research question?
Regardless of the thesis statement or topic, all research begins with a research question.
Without the right question, the analysis, literature review, and implications might miss their mark. This question should be unique, intriguing, and beyond a mere “yes” or “no” answer.
For instance, rather than asking, “Will Country X pursue nuclear proliferation?”, it's better to pose open-ended questions like, “How does…?” or “To what extent…?” Such an approach ensures nuanced and substantive answers.
Additionally, supplementary key questions should support the main research question's depth and intent.
Tip #2: Begin Work on the Thesis Statement and Break Up the Thesis into Manageable Sections
After selecting an appropriate topic and developing a central research question for the thesis statement, it is then necessary to apply the research and writing skills you have learned throughout your degree program.
It might be necessary to refine the thesis statement after some preliminary research; after all, you want a strong thesis statement rather than a weak thesis statement.
It is also essential to break up the thesis paper into manageable sections during the writing process. This strategy will help you to overcome the most common types of mental hurdle of creating a thesis paper that can be 50 or more pages in length.
For writing a thesis statement, this way of thinking is helpful before you begin writing. Instead of attempting to write every single sentence of a thesis statement in one long stretch, you can work on one section at a time, turn it in for review and work on the next section of the thesis statement while awaiting feedback.
Tip #3: Pay Attention to Your Professor's Feedback about Your Assignment
When I give my essay assignment to my students with advice on how to write a thesis, I also explain the importance of a strong thesis statement.
I advise them to avoid becoming emotionally attached to the thesis. That emotional attachment can lead to a battle of wills and wits with the capstone course's professor over the thesis statement examples they present.
When it comes to implementing feedback, revisions to the thesis paper often need to occur. Faculty members are there to help guide you and assist you in the production of a good-quality, argumentative thesis statement that will provide new insights for the reader.
Just go with the feedback you receive from your instructor as you write a sentence, or more, and move on to complete your thesis paper more efficiently.
Tip #4: Complete an Abstract
The abstract of a thesis is vital, so it must be carefully crafted. The abstract may be the only section of a published, scholarly paper or article that someone may take the time to read, based on their time constraints and interest.
Ideally, the abstract should be 250 words or less and must contain the main point of the paper. I advise students drafting an abstract for scholarly journal editors to ensure that the abstract has these elements:
An introductory sentence
A “hook” (why the reader should care about the thesis statement or its topic and to motivate the reader to look at your paper)
The central research question to show the main point of your paper
The research design – how you collected evidence to support your arguments
The results and implications, such as the negative and positive aspects of your main topic and the broader context of your research
Tip #5: Write the Literature Review
When crafting a literature review, incorporate multiple peer-reviewed articles from academic sources like ProQuest and EBSCOHost. Opt for articles frequently cited in other works to enhance your paper's credibility.
The review examines arguments in thesis statements and their counterarguments from scholarly works. For clear discussions, organize your review thematically, showing topic synthesis and your position. This reduces confusion.
For example, if 40 articles discuss open-source intelligence and seven focus on social media, that could be a central theme.
Rather than just listing articles, create broader themes and keep synthesizing. When crafting the thesis, evaluate each paragraph's relevance to the main research question. I advise students to assess the “So what?” factor. If a paragraph isn't pertinent, it might be best to remove it.
Tip #6: Develop a Theoretical Framework within Your Thesis Statement
Theories in theses are often mishandled, reflecting a student’s unclear grasp. Academic theory goes beyond mere "I have a theory" statements and leans on robust, time-tested frameworks.
For instance, a strategic intelligence studies thesis statement might employ national security theory or national defense theory. This theory should align with the thesis's central question.
For example, if probing how Country X uses social media for misinformation, a student might be directed to the communication theory, which aligns well with the study's main topic and question.
Tip #7: Select a Research Design
Before conducting research, students must devise a strategy to address their central question. The research design is their roadmap for data collection. This encompasses methodology, methods, and data gathering instruments like surveys or interviews. Research on humans requires IRB approval, which I advise against due to time constraints in a 16-week paper cycle. Additionally, it's vital to distinguish between “methodology” and “methods,” terms often mistakenly used interchangeably.
Methodology involves the justification of the how and why a research method was selected to address the central research question , according to Indeed. The three primary methodologies include:
- Qualitative methodology
- Quantitative methodology
- Mixed methods
“Mixed methods” involves a researcher’s use of at least one research method from a qualitative methodology and another research method from a quantitative methodology, then explaining how those methods will be integrated into a study.
But if two methods from the same methodology are used in a study, that is referred to as a multi-method approach. An example of a multi-method approach would be using a comparative case study as the first qualitative research method and process tracing as the second research method.
Research methods are linked to either qualitative or quantitative methodologies. They focus on “what” a researcher selected to interpret data.
Research method types include:
- Archival records
- Alternative futures
- Case studies
- Comparative case studies
- Content analysis
- Correlational research
- Descriptive research
- Ethnography
- Experimental research
- Phenomenology
- Process tracing
Tip #8: Write about Research Findings and Data
After gathering data for a thesis, analyzing its significance is crucial, with methods including coding. While qualitative methodology doesn't aim to prove anything, unlike the quantitative approach which tests hypotheses, it can discuss correlations, causation, and delve into theoretical implications in data.
Some may view qualitative research as subjective, but selecting variables in quantitative research has its subjectivity too. Ultimately, it's essential to adhere closely to the scientific method, rather than relying on opinions or claims without concrete evidence.
Tip #9: Consider How Bias Will Affect Your Thesis Statement
When writing thesis statements, it is necessary to consider how bias will affect your writing and your reader. Being 100% objective is an admirable goal, but it is impossible to avoid biases as we are human beings.
All of us have biases, including latent ones. At best, we can mitigate biases, such as using coding software, but never holistically remove bias. As researchers, we just need to be aware of biases and develop strategies to mitigate them.
Tip #10: Be Aware of the Limitations of a Study
The study's limitations section is a pivotal part of a thesis. It highlights the research's shortcomings and indicates what might be done differently.
For instance, a student may mention a 16-week time constraint or contemplate a different research design or question.
This section not only helps students recognize how to enhance their research but also guides future scholars. They can learn from prior omissions or envision alternative research avenues.
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How to Write a Strong Thesis Statement
A thesis can be found in many placesâa debate speech, a lawyerâs closing argument, even an advertisement. But the most common place for a thesis statement (and probably why youâre reading this article) is in an essay.
Whether youâre writing an argumentative paper, an informative essay, or a compare/contrast statement, you need a thesis. Without a thesis, your argument falls flat and your information is unfocused. Since a thesis is so important, itâs probably a good idea to look at some tips on how to put together a strong one.
Guide Overview
What is a âthesis statementâ anyway.
- 2 categories of thesis statements: informative and persuasive
- 2 styles of thesis statements
- Formula for a strong argumentative thesis
- The qualities of a solid thesis statement (video)
You may have heard of something called a âthesis.â Itâs what seniors commonly refer to as their final paper before graduation. Thatâs not what weâre talking about here. That type of thesis is a long, well-written paper that takes years to piece together.
Instead, weâre talking about a single sentence that ties together the main idea of any argument . In the context of student essays, itâs a statement that summarizes your topic and declares your position on it. This sentence can tell a reader whether your essay is something they want to read.
2 Categories of Thesis Statements: Informative and Persuasive
Just as there are different types of essays, there are different types of thesis statements. The thesis should match the essay.
For example, with an informative essay, you should compose an informative thesis (rather than argumentative). You want to declare your intentions in this essay and guide the reader to the conclusion that you reach.
To make a peanut butter and jelly sandwich, you must procure the ingredients, find a knife, and spread the condiments.
This thesis showed the reader the topic (a type of sandwich) and the direction the essay will take (describing how the sandwich is made).
Most other types of essays, whether compare/contrast, argumentative, or narrative, have thesis statements that take a position and argue it. In other words, unless your purpose is simply to inform, your thesis is considered persuasive. A persuasive thesis usually contains an opinion and the reason why your opinion is true.
Peanut butter and jelly sandwiches are the best type of sandwich because they are versatile, easy to make, and taste good.
In this persuasive thesis statement, you see that I state my opinion (the best type of sandwich), which means I have chosen a stance. Next, I explain that my opinion is correct with several key reasons. This persuasive type of thesis can be used in any essay that contains the writerâs opinion, including, as I mentioned above, compare/contrast essays, narrative essays, and so on.
2 Styles of Thesis Statements
Just as there are two different types of thesis statements (informative and persuasive), there are two basic styles you can use.
The first style uses a list of two or more points . This style of thesis is perfect for a brief essay that contains only two or three body paragraphs. This basic five-paragraph essay is typical of middle and high school assignments.
C.S. Lewisâs Chronicles of Narnia series is one of the richest works of the 20th century because it offers an escape from reality, teaches readers to have faith even when they donât understand, and contains a host of vibrant characters.
In the above persuasive thesis, you can see my opinion about Narnia followed by three clear reasons. This thesis is perfect for setting up a tidy five-paragraph essay.
In college, five paragraph essays become few and far between as essay length gets longer. Can you imagine having only five paragraphs in a six-page paper? For a longer essay, you need a thesis statement that is more versatile. Instead of listing two or three distinct points, a thesis can list one overarching point that all body paragraphs tie into.
Good vs. evil is the main theme of Lewisâs Narnia series, as is made clear through the struggles the main characters face in each book.
In this thesis, I have made a claim about the theme in Narnia followed by my reasoning. The broader scope of this thesis allows me to write about each of the seriesâ seven novels. I am no longer limited in how many body paragraphs I can logically use.
Formula for a Strong Argumentative Thesis
One thing I find that is helpful for students is having a clear template. While students rarely end up with a thesis that follows this exact wording, the following template creates a good starting point:
___________ is true because of ___________, ___________, and ___________.
Conversely, the formula for a thesis with only one point might follow this template:
___________________ is true because of _____________________.
Students usually end up using different terminology than simply âbecause,â but having a template is always helpful to get the creative juices flowing.
The Qualities of a Solid Thesis Statement
When composing a thesis, you must consider not only the format, but other qualities like length, position in the essay, and how strong the argument is.
Length: A thesis statement can be short or long, depending on how many points it mentions. Typically, however, it is only one concise sentence. It does contain at least two clauses, usually an independent clause (the opinion) and a dependent clause (the reasons). You probably should aim for a single sentence that is at least two lines, or about 30 to 40 words long.
Position: A thesis statement always belongs at the beginning of an essay. This is because it is a sentence that tells the reader what the writer is going to discuss. Teachers will have different preferences for the precise location of the thesis, but a good rule of thumb is in the introduction paragraph, within the last two or three sentences.
Strength: Finally, for a persuasive thesis to be strong, it needs to be arguable. This means that the statement is not obvious, and it is not something that everyone agrees is true.
Example of weak thesis:
Peanut butter and jelly sandwiches are easy to make because it just takes three ingredients.
Most people would agree that PB&J is one of the easiest sandwiches in the American lunch repertoire.
Example of a stronger thesis:
Peanut butter and jelly sandwiches are fun to eat because they always slide around.
This is more arguable because there are plenty of folks who might think a PB&J is messy or slimy rather than fun.
Composing a thesis statement does take a bit more thought than many other parts of an essay. However, because a thesis statement can contain an entire argument in just a few words, it is worth taking the extra time to compose this sentence. It can direct your research and your argument so that your essay is tight, focused, and makes readers think.
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In this article, we explain how to write a thesis statement in the best way possible. We look at what to include and the steps to take for writing your own, along with plenty of thesis statement examples to guide you.
A thesis statement summarizes the central points of your essay. It is a signpost telling the reader what the essay will argue and why. The best thesis statements are: Concise: A good thesis statement is short and sweet—don’t use more words than necessary. State your point clearly and directly in one or two sentences.
Learn how to write a top-notch dissertation or thesis with Grad Coach's straightforward 8-step guide (including examples and videos).
Write a thesis statement by clearly stating your topic, expressing your position, and providing key points. For example: “Social media impacts teens by influencing self-esteem, enabling cyberbullying, and shaping social interactions.” Be specific, concise, and arguable.
Learn how to write a master’s thesis with this in-depth guide. Discover vital strategies with insights and tips from an experienced educator.
Whether you’re writing an argumentative paper, an informative essay, or a compare/contrast statement, you need a thesis. Without a thesis, your argument falls flat and your information is unfocused.